Tuesday, April 14, 2020
updated outline in full so far
How they met
-they meet AT A CHAPTERS BOOKSTORE
-they talk various times about what they care about and where they are in life
-john has dislocated shoulder, getting into medicine
-sheryl is attempting to get into education
-she is into singing, him ultimate frisbee
-they sit down, stand up to discuss things at the store
Sheryl brings a friend to chapters
-sheryl and her friend Amanda see John sitting
-they pretend to look at the books in front of starbucks
-they discuss leaving because they feel uncomfortable
-they grab starbucks drinks and leave
Sheryl becomes friends with a girl at school
-one friend goes on an excursion with Sheryl with a photographer
-he takes them on a ride to his favourite restaurant
-They have supper there and the food is great
-her friend goes home early and Luca invites Sheryl to his house
-he takes sexy pictures of her and leaves voluntarily
-her friend takes her to whyte avenue and other things happened
Sheryl meets two friends in a school class
-two friends were sitting at a table in class
-they exchanged numbers
-this is were sarah starts to feel inadequate
-these girls are performing at high levels while she is not
-however they are nice enough to help her with an assignment
Sarah meets a friend named Amanda
-she was perhaps her favourite
-smart, organized, pretty and friendly
-Sarah picks her out as the girl who he is probably most likely to “date” john
-she is working at a restaurant while going to school
Sheryl meets another girl at the school yoga class
-they’d do yoga together at the school lawn
-Sarah is unable to continue because of getting a headache
-her friend invites her out again for yoga and will not see her there again
-her friend does not invite her out with her friends at all
She meets more friends in various places
-a girl named amy at a church she visited
-a few girls at her own church
-another friend named Brenna was quite nice
-she invited her to lunch, she came to the pool with Sarah
-all in all the nicest for all she did for her, during very hard times
-she would spend more time with Angela
-the only one worth mentioning was amy and angela
-amy was a great comfort to her when she was balling one day over the breakup
-angela is separate as they would spend many moments together
An outing together out on the town (a date)
-he takes her on a Walk in the park and have dinner
-they hold hands and kiss
-he uses this chance to tell what her parents say
-he asked for her father’s blessing
-they have a discussion about their feelings for each other
-John finds out she doesn’t want to date at this point
-he explains her dad thinks they should part ways here
-John should focus on getting into medicine
-she should focus too on her career
-he has to get his life together and needs healing
-she also has animosity of the past
Angela
-angela would become a huge part of the story
-her and Sarah met at the school, in a huge lecturing classroom
-she was many good things
-but they rubbed shoulders here and there
-she would ask things like “who are you going with?” (sarah embarrassed)
-she would ask me to edit her paper as Sarah was a pro at this
-Angela had lots of guy friends and dated some of them
-Sarah hung out with one in particular but she discouraged it
-Angela didn’t like that as a previous warning
-she said “Lawrence” is a bad guy
-she never told me “not” to
John and Sheryl decide to get married and so they get engaged
-they decide to inform their friends and settle in their house
-they throw a big party for the “newly to wed” couple but
-Sheryl has doubts
-John is meaning to stand by his fiancé (this is exploring the themes of acceptance and love and faith/confidence in oneself)
The families
-his, hers and Michelle’s (the parents)
-each expresses their feelings about john and sheryl
-they all have chat with him in some shape or form
-he texts Sheryl at this time to tell her what all three PARENTS SAID
The engagement
-there are many influences in their lives for good relationships so
Reveal who these persons are
-these are two people who have waited A LONG TIME to get engaged
To be sure this is what they want
-he has never been the wavering type with Sheryl, Sheryl has always
rather been having doubts and she has such a history with other men
too before him (more doubts)
-friends have always supported their relationship
-this Will explore themes of support and learning to develop trust in their relationship
The Sheppard family on relationship with John
-they are not against their daughter and john
-they have an aunt on her side that disagrees with the match
and they think this because her daughter has a history with dating him
-this makes it immoral for Sheryl to get engaged and marry him
Sheryl’s dating history
-she met a man at the same time that john came along
-he was in the same education career but john was pursuing medicine- perhaps write about the pros and cons of each
-another woman was also in love with the man also wanting Sheryl
-john’s concern: her leaving once again for another man – but he pushes through and ends up being strong as ever
-John is faulted for bringing on the engagement so soon
-was she suppose to tell him as he brought on the proposal to stop?
sheryls mom gets sick
-this interferes with their love life because Sheryl is planning the wedding but also making frequent visits to see her mom
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