Tuesday, April 14, 2020

updated outline in full so far

How they met -they meet AT A CHAPTERS BOOKSTORE -they talk various times about what they care about and where they are in life -john has dislocated shoulder, getting into medicine -sheryl is attempting to get into education -she is into singing, him ultimate frisbee -they sit down, stand up to discuss things at the store Sheryl brings a friend to chapters -sheryl and her friend Amanda see John sitting -they pretend to look at the books in front of starbucks -they discuss leaving because they feel uncomfortable -they grab starbucks drinks and leave Sheryl becomes friends with a girl at school -one friend goes on an excursion with Sheryl with a photographer -he takes them on a ride to his favourite restaurant -They have supper there and the food is great -her friend goes home early and Luca invites Sheryl to his house -he takes sexy pictures of her and leaves voluntarily -her friend takes her to whyte avenue and other things happened Sheryl meets two friends in a school class -two friends were sitting at a table in class -they exchanged numbers -this is were sarah starts to feel inadequate -these girls are performing at high levels while she is not -however they are nice enough to help her with an assignment Sarah meets a friend named Amanda -she was perhaps her favourite -smart, organized, pretty and friendly -Sarah picks her out as the girl who he is probably most likely to “date” john -she is working at a restaurant while going to school Sheryl meets another girl at the school yoga class -they’d do yoga together at the school lawn -Sarah is unable to continue because of getting a headache -her friend invites her out again for yoga and will not see her there again -her friend does not invite her out with her friends at all She meets more friends in various places -a girl named amy at a church she visited -a few girls at her own church -another friend named Brenna was quite nice -she invited her to lunch, she came to the pool with Sarah -all in all the nicest for all she did for her, during very hard times -she would spend more time with Angela -the only one worth mentioning was amy and angela -amy was a great comfort to her when she was balling one day over the breakup -angela is separate as they would spend many moments together An outing together out on the town (a date) -he takes her on a Walk in the park and have dinner -they hold hands and kiss -he uses this chance to tell what her parents say -he asked for her father’s blessing -they have a discussion about their feelings for each other -John finds out she doesn’t want to date at this point -he explains her dad thinks they should part ways here -John should focus on getting into medicine -she should focus too on her career -he has to get his life together and needs healing -she also has animosity of the past Angela -angela would become a huge part of the story -her and Sarah met at the school, in a huge lecturing classroom -she was many good things -but they rubbed shoulders here and there -she would ask things like “who are you going with?” (sarah embarrassed) -she would ask me to edit her paper as Sarah was a pro at this -Angela had lots of guy friends and dated some of them -Sarah hung out with one in particular but she discouraged it -Angela didn’t like that as a previous warning -she said “Lawrence” is a bad guy -she never told me “not” to John and Sheryl decide to get married and so they get engaged -they decide to inform their friends and settle in their house -they throw a big party for the “newly to wed” couple but -Sheryl has doubts -John is meaning to stand by his fiancĂ© (this is exploring the themes of acceptance and love and faith/confidence in oneself) The families -his, hers and Michelle’s (the parents) -each expresses their feelings about john and sheryl -they all have chat with him in some shape or form -he texts Sheryl at this time to tell her what all three PARENTS SAID The engagement -there are many influences in their lives for good relationships so Reveal who these persons are -these are two people who have waited A LONG TIME to get engaged To be sure this is what they want -he has never been the wavering type with Sheryl, Sheryl has always rather been having doubts and she has such a history with other men too before him (more doubts) -friends have always supported their relationship -this Will explore themes of support and learning to develop trust in their relationship The Sheppard family on relationship with John -they are not against their daughter and john -they have an aunt on her side that disagrees with the match and they think this because her daughter has a history with dating him -this makes it immoral for Sheryl to get engaged and marry him Sheryl’s dating history -she met a man at the same time that john came along -he was in the same education career but john was pursuing medicine- perhaps write about the pros and cons of each -another woman was also in love with the man also wanting Sheryl -john’s concern: her leaving once again for another man – but he pushes through and ends up being strong as ever -John is faulted for bringing on the engagement so soon -was she suppose to tell him as he brought on the proposal to stop? sheryls mom gets sick -this interferes with their love life because Sheryl is planning the wedding but also making frequent visits to see her mom

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